Haikus about things that drive you nuts

Write a haiku about something that drives you nuts. Well, I am going to put some comments that people made first. Ok?

Someone wrote:

Oh where would I start
And oh my where would it end
Oh not a good idea.

Nice! Someone else wrote:

My dirty dishes
They linger in the kitchen
I despise the smell.

I think some people will agree with that one! And finally:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don’t make sense
Refrigerator

Great!

And now one of my own…

The world can be crazy

One or two things at a time

But I will survive

I don’t know whether that really worked… One more:

My brother is so mad

There can’t be a day without him

Though I like him really

All this haiku writing is making me tired. Time for a rest.

What would a haiku about what is driving you nuts be like?

UPDATE (14/04/2011): I have realised that the haikus I wrote aren’t actually haikus. I thought that it was 5 words, 7 words then 5 words. It is actually 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables. Sorry!! You’ll have to do more in the comments to make up for my mistakes…

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